  I've finally gotten down to actually writing the story that's been banging around my head...sort of. I only have the first chapter done, but I want some opinions before I keep going; if the general concensus is that I suck, I'll start over. If it looks okay, I'll keep writing. SO! I would love it if people would take a look at it HERE: --sorry, I removed the link!--.
You can read the story and even leave reviews even if you aren't a member of fictionpress.net or fanfiction.net. To leave a review, you need to select the drop-down menu in the bottom left of the page; it should be one of the options. Please do so, and let me know what you think! :D --- EDIT: The general concensus was that I suck.
Or at least, the single person who had something to say said it sucked. I've changed it, and it's a little better (according to that person), but it still sucks, and it'll probably take a while for me to figure out all the things that suck, fix them, and then continue on in an un-sucky way, since I don't have any other outside opinions to help. Thanks for nothing! 
